Our Theme - Pamela
Omg!!! they're here we finally got what we wanted!!! Oops sorry you don't know what I'm talking about well my group and I chose our theme. Wait!! let me guess your wondering what could our theme be well it is...... MINIONS!!! Are you trying to figure out why we chose minions as our theme well it's because we want the people who are watching us fly our kite to laugh and smile. The purpose of this theme is for entertainment it also represents happiness. What I mean by happiness is that if you have seen the movie than you know how this makes you laugh so much and it makes your day.If you have seen the movie then you know what I'm talking about. So maybe you might enjoy watching our kite fly in the air. Thank You for taking your time and reading this and enjoy every day of updating because we will show you more
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Your voice is extremely energetic in this post. I love that. It draws me right in as the reader. However, I must say that your revision and editing is lacking. Remember always go back and reread what you wrote before you post it. If you did you would have caught simple mistakes like "their" instead of "They're" or "I'm" instead of "i'm". I would definitely recommend rereading and going back and fixing mistakes.
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